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16 February 2012 @ 07:02 am
fic : Enthralled (Hotch/Reid, NC-17)  

Title: Enthralled
Author: bowie28 (Bow)
Pairing/Characters: Hotch/Reid
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Fluff, PWP
Word count: 1,145
Beta: None. Sorry. It’s pretty straight forward. And it’s basically p0rn, so I didn’t want to bother anybody. Spoiler: None.
Disclaimer: FICTION
Summary: It is a good morning.
Author’s Notes: This is the first story I finished in a while. I’d like to thank lintu91 for reminding me that I am a writer, lol. Written for impulsiveanswer who requested ‘E for Enthralled’ on my long overdue H/R alphabet memes


He’s watched Spencer before. It’s a little creepy the first time he did it, or so Spencer claimed (though he had a feeling Spencer didn’t really mind from his reaction afterward). Spencer likes being the center of attention when the attention is the right kind, Aaron has learned. He loves to be touched and pampered and fussed about when it’s by the right person, though he will never admit it. Aaron Hotchner wakes up honored every day to be that person.

“Stop it. I need sleep,” Spencer mumbles into his pillow.

Aaron smiles. “So sleep. No one’s stopping you.”

“Your brain waves are. It’s distracting.” Spencer flips on his back and turns to the other side. The moles on Spencer’s shoulder blades stare at Aaron, inviting. He knows what Spencer is doing and he’s not going to pick this morning to disappoint his lover.

Spencer is not as bony as the first time Aaron had his arms around him. Years ago by a shallow grave in Georgia, Spencer felt like a rootless withering, thawing tree against Aaron’s body. Today Spencer fits in his arms, warm and real. Aaron rests his chin on the bare shoulder and pulls Spencer close.

He hears Spencer sigh and feels that tiniest smile breaking from the way Spencer inhales. It’s more than refreshing to know that he can still do this, that what he does, no matter how small, brings the other person’s joy. It’s exhilarating to know what kind of sound a kiss behind Spencer’s ear would make or what kind of muscle reflex a slight brush past the nipples would cause. To have that kind of knowledge, it’s empowering. It’s enthralling.

“You’re warm,” Spencer coos, pressing his body back against his chest.    

He smiles into Spencer’s hair, which smells heavenly right now. “I’m glad.”

Spencer hums, sending faint vibration through Aaron’s upper body. It makes him want to do things.

His hand travels down the bare stomach, passes the dipping curve into the soft white sheet before resting on the smooth hip. The skin is cool under his fingers and he squeezes the flesh just to hear the appreciative sound he knows Spencer will make.

“You’re not gonna let me sleep, are you?” Spencer inquires, face half turned in Aaron’s neck, eyes still closed.

“Can you blame me?” he whispers, fingers ghosting over the skin until they find their destination.

Spencer sighs as Aaron’s fingertip circles the still sensitive muscle. The lubrication is still there. Not a lot, but it’s there. And he tests it, breaching Spencer with his finger.


Spencer’s hum is different this time. It’s accompanied by relief. It maddens Aaron.

“Can I? I really want to.” It’s impossible to keep his voice steady.

Aaron swears he hears a chuckle. “Always a gentleman.” Spencer’s turning in his arms, looking up with a smirk. “Kiss me, then you can have whatever you want.”

The man before him suddenly looks years younger, yet the confidence in those eyes reassures Aaron once again that this is it, this is right, this is what it’s supposed to feel, to be. So he leans in and kisses those lips until he can’t breathe.

Spencer pants against his mouth, smiling, laughing. “Come on, old man, before I fall asleep again.”

He can’t help returning the laugh, “What do you mean ‘again’?” before trailing kisses along Spencer’s neck.

Spencer replies with a press back on his finger and a suppressed moan. Aaron can’t take his eyes off Spencer who now looks so enviously blissful in his arms.

The added finger surprises Spencer, but only for a second before he starts pushing back, urging Aaron on. It quickly becomes unbearable: the sounds Spencer makes, the way Spencer moves against him, the power Aaron feels to be the one inducing them.

“You’re too much,” Aaron says in Spencer’s ear, crooking his fingers. It makes Spencer cry an uncharacteristically high-pitched sound.

“You’re killing me,” Aaron whispers, moving the fingers in the way that he knows will drive Spencer crazy.

“I swear... I’ll kill you myself,” Spencer stutters, grabbing Aaron’s ass, “if you don’t fuck me right now.”

He thinks he laughs at that, but he can’t be sure because suddenly there are fingers around his cock, stroking roughly, and Spencer breathing heavily against his neck. Everything is burning up.

The fingers around him are gone and he’s suddenly swallowed by this incredibly warm tightness. It keeps pulling him in.

“God, you feel so good,” he praises his lover.

Spencer makes an agreeing sound, and Aaron rewards him with a firm thrust.


“You like that?” Aaron pulls Spencer’s hips toward him again.


There’s something incredibly sensual about Spencer cursing. It makes Aaron do things he wouldn’t normally do.

“Use me,” he says, thrusting deep this time. “Fuck yourself on my cock.”

Spencer cries as he pushes back reflexively; his fingers digging in Aaron’s thigh, leaving red crescent marks.

“Yes,” he urges his lover. “Like that.”

Spencer feels sublime around him, warm and tight; all consuming. It takes everything in him not to return Spencer’s movements.  

“You’re so gorgeous,” Aaron tells him. “I want to lock you up so nobody else gets to lay their eyes on you.”

“Aaron…” Spencer’s hand on his thigh starts to tremble while the pushes and the pulls become erratic. “Please.”

“What do you need?”

“Touch me,” Spencer pants, hips never stop moving.


“Fuck!” Spencer curses as the movement has found him that angle again.

“Here?” Aaron palms the angry erection between his lover’s legs.

“Please.” The sob is drenched in desperation as Spencer’s whole body is shaking. “I can’t…”

“Shhh.” Aaron coos, thumping the oozing tip. “I got you.” And he starts stoking Spencer in earnest.

Before long Spencer finds his rhythm again, and oh, he’s not shy about it, which is one of the most surprising things Aaron has discovered over the years. It makes Aaron harder, if that’s possible.

“Are you close, baby?” Aaron asks. “You’re gonna make me come.”

“Close,” Spencer breathes. “So close, Aaron.”

“Baby, I need you to come.” Aaron speeds his hand. “I don’t think I can…”

Another cuss word and Spencer shoots all over Aaron’s hand and the sheets. Then Aaron hears himself cry out, and he’s exploding inside Spencer, so intensely he doesn’t know where it begins and where it ends.

It’s not until Spencer shifts in his arms that he remembers where they are again. Spencer feels cool against his skin. It’s the kind of coolness that makes him wonder if this is what heaven feels like, if there is such a place, that is.

“This is a good morning.” Spencer remarks, looking up at him.

“Why, did you doubt me, Mr.Hotchner?” Aaron inquires.

 “Never, Mr.Reid.” Spencer smiles brightly. “I have every confidence in your ability to fulfill your husbandly duties. So far you’ve exceeded my expectations.”



amy494walkeramy494walker on February 16th, 2012 12:27 am (UTC)
Ngghh! Morning!Sex TFW!

That was painfully hot. Honestly, so freaking hot! And the reveal at the end of them being married!? Perfection. I'm so glad you're writing again *squees* XD
Bow: CM : H/R must touchbowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:24 pm (UTC)
I am so pervy, hee. Thank you so much. I'm glad to be in writing mood again. Being on Tumblr definitely helps. :D
marisolsopamarisolsopa on February 16th, 2012 12:40 am (UTC)
God this was so hot. I think morning sex is so hot, maybe because the bodies feel warmer and I don't know, different after just waking up and jkjnevjknevjve

And yes them being married!!! Peeeerfect.
Bow: CM : H/R close to youbowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:28 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much. I see you're using M/R icon but you're reading my story. And leaving a comment too! You're super awesome. <333
lintu00 on February 16th, 2012 01:07 am (UTC)
My dear god bowie! That was so hooooooooot!! I shall sit here consumed in lust thanks to you!
Unf, you just killed me.
Also, I so loved the "Mr. Hotchner" and "Mr. Reid", I can so imagine them joking about who gets to change his last name.

Yay! So glad I made you remember how awesome writer you are :D
Keep the good job!
Bow: CM : H/R with coffeebowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:31 pm (UTC)
LOL, I have to thank you. It's been a while since I feel inspired enough to write anything. Even though it's 99% porn, hee. I always wanted to write them cuddling in bed in the morning. And well, I don't see many morning sex stories for our boys, so I just had to. I added the banter because they seem the type, lol. I'd love to be a fly on their bedroom wall, if you know what I mean. ;)
lintu00 on February 16th, 2012 01:32 pm (UTC)
Can I be a fly with you??
And god yes, 99% is good so no complains here.
Let's hope you keep being inspired right? There's never enough H/R in the world ;D
My Addiction.........this doorway to fanfictionjosieb1 on February 16th, 2012 07:48 am (UTC)
This is my first proper Hotch/Reid fic and I loved it, you made it seem almost cannon. Thanks for sharing
Bow: CM : MGG + Thomasbowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, I hope this gives your good impression for the pairing. There are lots of really great H/R fics out there if you want to venture more.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :D
Momma Ali: pic#114201997cmali on February 16th, 2012 08:19 am (UTC)
BOW!!! Perfectly gorgeous and perfect and amazing and... And... I've missed you. And our boys. And Beth is so a beard. Just sayin...
Bow: CM : H/R must touchbowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:36 pm (UTC)
Ali!!!! I missed you. Where have you been?!? I know, right? (Though I can't hate her. She and Hotch are just too damn cute together. But then again, I think dating!Hotch is always going to be super cute, hee.) Thanks, baby. I'm glad to be able to write these two again. It's been a while. <333
Silver Mmaldeluxx on February 16th, 2012 10:26 am (UTC)
*nguh* Cute and way way hot 8D
Bow: CM : H/R in bathroombowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:38 pm (UTC)
Cute and hot, that's just what I aimed for. XD
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it.
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Bow: CM : I knew you'd understandbowie28 on February 16th, 2012 12:40 pm (UTC)
Hee, I know, right? I didn't know what I didn't do this sooner. (Well, actually I did, but this one is a little more on the fluffy side and a little less kinky, hee.) Thank you so much. You know I wuv you too. <333
Ana: CM :: Happy face of triumphaqua_zephyrus on February 16th, 2012 03:03 pm (UTC)
God. Read this for the... third time this morning.

Absolutely beautiful and steamy like whoa, love. Missed your writing so intensely. <333 Hope you do more soon like this. It's just gorgeous to see.
Bow: CM : H/R stand by youbowie28 on February 17th, 2012 12:43 pm (UTC)
Oh, the third time! That's the best compliment a writer can get I think. Thank you so so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. <3
The Reverend Kuria Dalmatiakuriadalmatia on February 16th, 2012 04:19 pm (UTC)
Delicious! Just the way to start a Thursday. I loved how you have them here, snarky and horny and very much in love.
Bow: CM : H/R in bathroombowie28 on February 17th, 2012 12:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. Well, they are snarky and horny and very much in love. XD
blythechild: Reid Morgan kissblythechild on February 16th, 2012 05:27 pm (UTC)
Nice! You really nailed down Hotch's 'voice'.
*thumbs up*
Bow: CM : H/R close to youbowie28 on February 17th, 2012 12:45 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you. I find Hotch's voice to come to me more naturally than Reid's does. So glad you enjoyed it. :3
rebak1ttenrebak1tten on February 16th, 2012 06:42 pm (UTC)
Lovely story, thanks so much!
Bow: CM : H/R at gun rangebowie28 on February 17th, 2012 12:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Chensuu: Reid touseledchensuu on February 18th, 2012 12:09 pm (UTC)
Hot and amazing and OMG I loved it!
Bow: CM : H/R close to youbowie28 on February 18th, 2012 12:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)
szarabasjkaszarabasjka on March 1st, 2012 07:14 pm (UTC)
Awww, how come this can be so sweet and so Hot at the same time?
Bow: CM : H/R close to youbowie28 on March 2nd, 2012 05:23 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you! They kind of made it easy. XD
Chensuu: Reid map boardchensuu on May 9th, 2012 08:39 pm (UTC)
Absolutely beautiful and erotic and mesmerizing. Loved it so much.
Bow: CM : H/R must touchbowie28 on May 10th, 2012 07:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! I miss writing these two. I need to do something about that. :)
Ginaskimthesurface on June 21st, 2012 05:16 am (UTC)
This was absolutely delicious. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this pairing and this was just fuel to that fire!
Bow: CM : H/R with coffeebowie28 on June 21st, 2012 05:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.